It seems that the Self Esteem I have
Is as much as I had thought....
Yep... not much, Sad huh?
Don't look at me like that
You make me feel small
Don't whisper.... not about me
I know I'm not pretty
I know that I'm loud
I shouldn't care what you think
I know... But I do and it hurts
Whatever self esteem I had you killed
Killed it dead, Stomped it gone
It was so small, as fine as dust
But you managed to find and kill it
So my Esteem says xX'Thanks a Bunch!!!'Xx
A contest entry
- 15 Lines or Less - Free Verse Only - Self Esteem by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended April 17, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Scoff! lol Comment Please *~*
Comments
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Ah, this one is more raw, more visceral, but more immediate and personal. Lets hope those feelings are history,
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very nice piece, nice form and flow. Loved the rant aspect of this one. Thanks for the great entry
Bunny
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