Have you ever
looked into someones eyes
and realized that they care
that they'll be there forever
and a day
just to catch you when you fall
did you realize You need that
and would do the same for them?
A contest entry
- have you ever ..... ? by DancingRed.
300 points, ended April 24, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Have you ever...? by Exodus.
2550 points, ended November 27, 2007, 38 entries
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yes I have I'm lucky huh!!! nice work good luck
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this indeed was a great take on the prompt.
best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory -
This was lovely. I don't think I understand the need for the capitalisation on "you" in the second last line, but other than that, this was a nice, simple piece
Thank you
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Yep.
Love and friendship is great. Your words show the extend of love, and the feeling that love is a two way street. The last two lines are amazing; they turn the whole poem around. Beeeautiful.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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me like lol
i def see it in ur eyes=)
dani
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