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My Enemy

The mirror of my soul
so many stones have been thrown

Rejected
Disappointment overwhelming me
Now I lash out
I already know the score

The odds have been stacked
Dreams are for the ignorant
Having come face to face with my enemy.

Author notes

Victimized internally and externally.

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    April 17, 2007
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    great piece filled with emotion. Nice form and flow, thanks for this fine entry. Bunny