Here-
There-
You always are.
My love shall never die.
To me
Love is forever.
After the first kiss,
I was stuck.
The warmth
I never felt before.
When I was cold,
You were there to hold me.
The sunny days-
The starry nights.
But nothing compares
With all the love I have for you.
The thunderstorms-
The rain.
The romance.
The warmth.
Now we are here-
We are there-
Forever Our love
will last till forever.
Author notes
I'm 15....
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice
I most definately like the emotion, you show in this poem. I think the only polish needed is experiance, I'm working on that my self by the way, I have some that are atrosis. Good work. UNT
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this is nicely written, i can feel your love for this person. very good indeed. good luck in your love life & in my contest.
--blessed be--
dark princess vampire -
Simple with a awesome feeling
What I liked about it was that you made it simple. That proves that you could write because I liked it. It touch my heart even though I'm a guy.
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