Fuck the government
Who keeps me broke
Fuck the cops
Who won't let me toke
Fuck the man
Who won't let me work
Fuck the foreman
He's a red neck jerk
Fuck the law
Who protects the rich
Fuck nancy
The self rightious bitch
Fuck the day
That I was born
And asshole people
Who toot their own horn
Fuck the church
The hypocrite fucks
Up high they perch
And steal your bucks
Fuck women
Their all whores
Fuck the warden
Who locks the doors
Fuck the life
That I once knew
But most of all
FUCK YOU
Author notes
Fuck your 25 rule
A contest entry
- Freedom! Is it really freedom? by lonewolvernsoul.
525 points, ended April 20, 2007, 26 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
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1332 points, ended April 29, 34 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a sandpaper read.
thanks for entering -
This was a contest for the people who entered my style prompt conest were you one of them if so what type of style did I give you?
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IT DOES SEEM FUNNY TO ALL THOSE
WHY AMERICA SPENDING BILLION OF DOLLARS FOR DESTROYING OTHER COUNTRIES BUT NOT SPENDING THE 10% OF THAT MONEY TO COMFORT ITS OWN PEOPLE
GOVERNMENT IS BEING ENOUGH NASTY
THANKS FOR ENTERING
IT WAS A ROCKING AND SMASHING PIECE
KIND OF ROCK STAR'S PLAY
NICE ONE
THANKS
YOU SCORED 69 IN MY CONTEST OUT OF 100
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THE POET OF HEARTS AND BEAUTIFUL WORDS
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not sure I agree with all of it but the beauty is that you stated in the last line that you don't give a fuck and I like that! good job!!
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i liked this poem but i think that u should not include women in that poem, but otherwise i like this poem
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Your anger is aimless and poorly directed. It doesn't engage the reader, and this piece is very repetitive. The word "fuck" doesn't equate to an angry poem. Pick one or two of the things that make you angry and expand on solely them without using the word "fuck" 15 million times. Your emotion has potential, you just need to manipulate it the right way.
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Out of the mouths of babes
I will look past your youth knowing you have not lived long enough to know the social injustices.I am angry about every thing I wrote of.You do not usualy fuck something you agree with so I believe Fuck it all has its place. -
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The government is a load of redundant, hypocritical bullshit in any and all forms. However, in my personal opinion I believe that a poem that is mostly the "f" word is utterly ineffective. But if you believe that it gets your point across in a poetic way, I suppose that's your stand.
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honesty kills but...
let the truth rein free!! The goverment are fucking hepocrites of themselves and the laws they defend with out helping us the working men>>>
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I wrote this thirty years ago and it is still true.So much for change
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You submitted this to my last contest, it's still awesome and a great fit for the prompt though. thanks for entering and keep writting
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this poem is as awesome as the government sucks. that is to say, this poem is freakin amazing.
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im not much for the F word but i got the point anyway. i liked it up to the dig against women. not an accurate potrayal but oh well...you got the point across.
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Wow excellent work there! X goodluck
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Shit fuck oh my god THIS WAS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR. Oi! That was good man... You got a pretty damn good chance in this contest my friend
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Gee you just ruined my day.Fuck You
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Got a real problem with the women hating. If you are going to write about how you hate women then you should spell correctly so you dont get laughed out of town!
you say and I quote "Fuck women
Their all whores"
That should be They're because their shows ownership and they're is a contraction shortening the words they are into a shorter easier to use word. You could take the time to care about your poems or go back to 9th grade English. Kinda sad.
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It doesnt matter! Grammer doesn't matter! What matters in poetry is feeling and there is plenty of raw emotion here.
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Yeah feelings matter, but so does GRAMMAR. Bad grammar turns a good poem into a pile of shit. Especially with the whole, "their" and "they're", thing. That's just basic fifth grade English. I agree with nitefire, it is sad.
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good poem despite the grammar slip.
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Since I've read this one already and commented then I don't see a point in commenting on it again, just read the last comment lol.
Love not war
Megan -
This poem has all the subtly of a peg being driven into a railway sleeper but remarkably it has a certain charm and a thread of humour running through it that I really enjoyed. I would like to tell many poems in this comp to fuck off, ironically this is not one of them.
David
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I see many many bad days here
A time where they say you have to yet give you no means to do it with . Take away your cigarettes yet give more room for alcohole commerciasls on TV I guess alcohole is not longer bad for your health .Ha Well I dont think its going to get better no matter who gets into office for if they are rich then we are all stilled screwed
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This was... fucking good to put it bluntly. I loved the rhyme, I loved the flow... I loved the message! Amazing job and good luck in my contest!
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Fuck your comments
Just kidding. I got right into the swing of your poem and am proud to have read it. This is a favourite poem and am so glad you reached deep down to get that angry protestor out to write a brilliant poem. Fuck yeah!
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Brilliant piece of rebellious anger--direct and in-your-face as a smack in the teeth with a baseball bat!
Great stuff.
Bill
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I think you might win just for the simple fact that you did what I wanted people to do. I put rules down under a request for an anarchy poem hoping someone would catch my drift. I love it lol. The only thing I didn't like about it was the fuck women part. I am a woman lol. But for the sake of the poem and what it was about I like it. This kicks ass.
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damn this fucking poem really rocks and gets the point across.
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Omg! Now here's a side of you I have'nt seen.Kinda kinky,lol.
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angry much?!
So angry and yet honest. I like this one...alot.
Keep up the honesty and maybe you'll get your point acrossed to someone who can do something about it.
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That was thirty years ago.I had to conform.
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A bit angry are we??? lol
Wow...expressive..oh, and okay then..lol
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So nice to see you again.I'm going to huff and puff and,wait that was thirty years ago.
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pissed?
such anger . . . i like! the truth comes out! but come on did ya have to call us whores? eh -shrugs- i like this to the very line! looks great! -
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Used to be
I think you can see in my poetry I have a little bit different opinion of you beautiful sweet charming desirable did I say sweet ladies.Thirty years can change things.
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