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{~Your A Disease~}

drained of sympathy for you, i wish you dead
laying on the floor with no movement
blood pouring from your heart, your head, your wrist
i gave you every oppurtunity to come through
i trusted your, my own flesh, my own blood
you gave up, now you cant run
i want your blood, i want your pain
i want to hear your cries for help
your suffering, your soul screeching aloud
how much you want to die
i swear ill make it true
i wont love you, theres nothing left to make me
your very breath steals my whole being
how dare you still exist
your so undeserving of your life
your heart
[the one thats a black hole]
how does it feel to be so empty?
satisfaction, no gurantee
not until i see a pool of blood that leaves your stain
and this is nothing to me
nothing at all
you took away my number one incentive to be ok
you use him like a tool, but your cheap attempt will pass
ill take pieces of broken glass
and shove them in your skull
decapitate your body
[only pretending that your whole]
burn the smallest remains
just until im satisfied
some say that that wont help
but its worth a try
this will be my counsling
your deaths my therapy
next time you try to use him
youll know not to fuck with me

CAUSE NOW YOUR FUCKING DEAD TO ME
YOUR FILTHY , YOUR A DISEASE
YOU CALL ME WHAT YOU ARE, DONT TRY
YOU WONT EVER BE BETTER THAN ME


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  • Malcolm
    November 6, 2008
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    Use the anger to beat him.


  • LunaAmara
    September 3, 2007

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    this is dark....and quite angry--but i can relate to this because i have felt this at some time also--
    good luck


  • DancingShadowCorpse
    July 30, 2007

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    Damn, very very angry! I can see that this person caused someone you love some deep harm. Great write! THank you for entering!


  • Jiyo
    July 25, 2007
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    so much bitter resentment....i like it


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    June 28, 2007

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    Wow

    this is soooo full of emotion and hatred. It leaves the reader wondering what happened between you and this person, a very dark write indeed. Kudos and good luck in the contest. I'm sorry for all the pain you've gone through


  • WishMeAway--x
    June 25, 2007

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    whoa...

    yeah, i'd definately say revenge. and i love it. i wanna help!*pick me*

    ♥.love.
    =]


  • Claudia Incognito
    June 24, 2007
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    Everytime I read this, I wonder, is it supposed to be You are, like you're, or plainly your.


  • kissjess
    June 21, 2007

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    Okay,

    let me just say I love it. I'm not really leaving comments because I'm sort of reading over all the other poetry in this contest, but this is the first one I've commented, just because I love it so much. I love the lines,

    'how dare you still exist
    your so undeserving of your life'

    I just couldn't resist commenting because it is so good. I really love it. It's just so amazing.


  • Clinging-to-Life
    June 21, 2007
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    i love this write! Good Job. Keep it up.


  • CassidyEngle
    June 21, 2007
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    I love this


  • Sinfully Yours
    May 14, 2007
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    wow!

    you know, a lot of revenge poems i read, none have the courage to put in any serious filth and 'real' feelings like that. most people who want revenge don't use dainty words to put into poetry, they let it out like you do in this poem. I have to say it is really great, because it's as though it was written with real anger! I love it! Good luck!


  • lil lette
    April 17, 2007
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    wow jen can you say angry or psycho? thats one of the best poems you've done and i like it but its a lil on the dark side and off the deep end!!!!! but you know i deffinatly know where your commin from and i think that your poem is great!!! love ya!!


  • drunknmindsobrheart
    April 17, 2007

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    angryjeny go pyschooooooooo...again...lol

    god i love you


    so much


    Im gonna send u a letter today

    &im gonna find some pictures to send lol

    theyll be amazing


    bcs were fucking amazing

    vlakaschlab
    vlaba cob
    PENIS

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