Here you are again,
Being ignored
But hell you're use to it
They can live their happy lives
And you can just sit there
All alone
Because you lost all of your friends
In a way you're happy
No more bedrail
But in a way you're sad
Because now you're all alone
What do you care?
So what if you're alone?
They don't need you
And you don't need them
So what if you feel pain
I am not afraid to keep on living
I am not afraid to walk this world alone
Because pain will not take me
I will never give in
Because that's my courage from with in
Please tell me what you think
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And you call me a good poet!!
Hezus Scher, your poems just totally beat mine up.
And oddly, I know exactly who this poem is about.
Never wory that you are alone sister, cause I'm here.
And i always have been.
[Well accept for that want time with Fernando...]
XD
Sorry
Joke
But
I love you homie, so don't worry what they choose to do, it's better than what used to happen right?
You have your friends here for you now, and it makes me sad to think you ever had to have this kind of sorrow.
=]
Look out for the full moon, it's on the move.
Love yah like a sistah <3
&chez;♥
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Awesome!
I could completely understand every emotion in here. It's very realistic. I hate it when people write a poem that's mainly adjectives that make no sense together just to sound cool. THIS describes real feelings in a straightforward way. Excellent job!
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This was really weel written. I really liked it. I mean, I love the ending, "I will never give in, Because that's my courage from within". It was really good.
Good job,
Keep it up,
peace♥riley gal---
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A very deep poem, written in an interesting style..
There are many forms of pain. Combine some and torture ensues. It takes a lot of courage not to give in..
Well done, my friend..
Evert {o!-}
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