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So Twisted I am

So twisted I am not in bliss I can't take no more of this!!!
Why is this planet going to the pot? I pray for all that have been shot,
down away from the dreams and streams of aspirations by means of this society.

So twisted I am not in bliss I can't take no more of this!!!
Social services corrupt and fronting taking children away.
Trying to play god or something. All those people they waited to late for who really needed the help fell through the cracks now they're on the attack.
My sister you shall get your kids back.

So twisted I am not in bliss I can't take no more of this.!!!
Children raising children so many babies being born to scorn.
They have less of a chance because thier parents are torn to shreds, from getting beat in the head, by what thier parents did and now dread. The cycles are not being broken.
They are being used as tokens and excuses for our youth to lean on mistruths.

So twisted I am not in bliss I can't take no more of this!!!
Gang violence is senseless but when we have no more strengths to give to the kids.
Worrying about how much you can stash in your pouch then we shall have a genocide of our youth. That is the truth. NOt much to look forward too.  Whole planet is becoming unglued. Corruption on all sides can't hide no more we're cornered like rabbits in a snake den.

We must fight for our lives to survive.
You must be wise build your armour in the lord.
Stay on his word no matter what you have heard.
Start praying everyday. Maintaining your way.

I wanna be in bliss I want the lord to take all of this and lift us up we know he can't miss. Please ask the lord he will do something about this just ask and he shall grant you the dreams of your life no more staying in strife. 

Unfortunately my voice is but one.
When I speak out to my savior Jesus son there'll be no doubts.
I feel the hope that we can have I see the dreams coming to past.
We must pray so it can last.

AMEN

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  • simo saih
    August 19, 2007
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    really nice continue

    dont give up the fight


  • Musimwa
    May 4, 2007

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    Sissy, thank u for the well reflected piece. I think u were supposed to have send me the link so that i could have commented on it. Allow me to take my time on this your piece. One, it is beautiful, beautiful thought{sentiments} The ideas are so clear. I love that. Though, it is sad(it carries the bitterness that reside in your heart), the piece is very good. I love it. It is from a heart that reflects. The issues, u have touched, are logical, thank u. Sissy i found a spelling mistake here;
    they don't have a chance because thier parents are torn to shreds; this line, "Their"

    About the title, u can just take: SO TWISTED I AM..., I think it is ok.

    Have a good day, i love your writing. Keep it up.

    Good bless u