Does she open her[legs]self to you
in a way that I didn't? &&
does she ^a^r^c^h^ her back at-
sexy angles that make you
((moan in all the right places)) Happy?
I didn't exactly give you everything
but [baby,angel] I came close.
&& I let you snort up my happiness
and inject my sense of self.
.m.a.i.n.l.i.n.e.d. everything that mattered...
&& you whispered sweet promises in my ears
[swearing that I wouldn't be a lousy lay
ififif I would just give it up ]
&& did she give you everything-
I didn't have?
Because [dollface],
I only l♥o♥v♥e♥d
you for the drugs.
Author notes
oldoldold relationship.
very personal.
please be nice.
PointXBlankXRange
I chose: dirtypretty, drugs, love.
"I went to the store and bought a soda."
I chose option 1 and 3
A contest entry
- [D.irrty..P.retty] Drugs, Alcohol, Eating disorders & Piercings by CianLOVES.
300 points, ended May 27, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 3 OPTIONS. INCLUDING DIRTYPRETTY, ADDICTIONS,AND CUTTING. by BeautifulDisaster9.
425 points, ended August 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [Baby Tug The String On My Back, Maybe I'll Breathe A Little Longer.] by SarahEatsAirplane.
343 points, ended August 21, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ::>Dirty Pretty by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely done. Thanks and good luck.
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you are really good with closing lines. this really reminds me of my sc bailey... the way she was anyway.
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WOWWWW.
AMAZING. I LOVE IT LOVE IT DOLL!
NICE JOB.
THANKS FOR ENTERING AND BEST OF LUCK!!
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This poem is wonderfully crafted, the first stanza is my favorite and I enjoy the hidden messages
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Wow I really loved this especially the first stanza! I like the way you say something & then mean something else, very effective! Well done & good luck in my contest! x
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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Thanks
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*wide eyes*
Oh.... Wow. This is beautiful. So sad, so angry. I've been here before... by the way it sounds, in exactly that situation. && it hurts. you did an amazing job showing all the emotions in this piece.
I love it!!
Keep it up, doll
♥♥
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Thanks! I kind of liked this one also. There are bound to be more about this just because I'm trying to get it out of my system and sort of... stop thinking about it. And I figured that if I wrote about it, I could [hopefully] get over it and move on. *crosses fingers* Thanks again for the comment!
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