They love girls like you
They love girls that are easy to play with
((And you know exactly what I mean))
Pull you this way ----->
<------ Push you that
>>In and out.<< Up and down.
You know every single position…
B.A.R.B.I.E girl
Plastic to the extreme level.
Blonde slices of fake hair on your head
And make up
Lots and lots of make up
((Once I licked my finger
pressed it to your cheek..
and left a hole))
But you know what…
Apparently you’re b|e|a|u|t|i|f|u|l
(That’s what they all tell you right?)
[[That’s what they say when..]]
They take you to their bedrooms and play with you
A.l.l….N.i.g.h.t….L.o.n.g.
Author notes
KetFace - Magic xX
The barbie option?
A contest entry
- Burn, Bite, Glitter, Fight, Cry, 1st600, 2nd300, 3rd150, Enter it by sleepingINblackRain.
1050 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
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525 points, ended May 10, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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450 points, ended June 2, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
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550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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600 points, ended July 11, 2007, 15 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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Congrats on the trophies!
I loved the lay out, especially the
"Pull you this way ----->
<------ Push you that
>>In and out.<<" bits -
Well Done
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I loved it
Good Luck
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Still amazing
I remember this one, you won silver in one of my previous contests. I still love it. Never stop writeing and as always thanks for entering my contest -
Damn right how is that beautiful... but yeah they say you are beautiful as that is what you apparently want to hear just so you give them more of what they want. The fkeness of their looks and all that lot is disgusting.
As I had a conversation with one of my male mates, we are both scared of love and commitment and stuff I asked him to make his friend stop sending messages saying he loved me and stuff as we'd only met once or twice and only been talking for a month or so on the phone, He said, "Oh, he's saying it cos it's what most woman want to hear, innit? I mean you are different and so am I as I wont say that but..."
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They do look so pretty, but I so very much despise them.
I think thisis the first drity/pretty piece that i have seen that actually works, without looking outright retarded and making the poem hard to follow, nice.
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Apparently you’re b|e|a|u|t|i|f|u|l
(That’s what they all tell you right?)
[[That’s what they say when..]]
They take you to their bedrooms and play with you
A.l.l….N.i.g.h.t….L.o.n.g.
Great poem I love the above line....to many people fall for it looking for who know s what
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So Delicate && Beautiful.
Mwah Well Done Sweetheart ♥ ♥
Love&&Stuff
♥
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wooow...AMAZING. great job. i loved this part.
They love girls that are easy to play with
((And you know exactly what I mean))
Pull you this way ----->
<------ Push you that
>>In and out.<< Up and down.
You know every single position…
just amazing thanks for entering and good luck! -
whoa, so true you know. Sometimes I just don't get it. Awesome poem though. You tell it like it is real well. Keep writing from within.
See you around the deep end
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Woah. It's so true. I love the way to talk about putting a hole in her face.....
creepy....true.....wonderfull.....beauty.
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wow this is good i like it its awesome good luck in my contest
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' They love girls that are easy to play with
((And you know exactly what I mean))
Pull you this way ----->
<------ Push you that
>>In and out.<< Up and down.
You know every single position…'
love those lines^^ =] great poem =] ♥ -
SUPERB and CREATIVE
i have always notice your creativity, your colourful talent that brings the attitude and cuteness in this yummy poem, i like the taste of this spicy but delicious poem..yeah, ....BANG BANG thing..lol...there's not a single "rubbish" in your poem, they're true and serious..not a laughing piece of junk..NO..NO...this poem is brilliant, it's great! keep this up, i like d other piece you wrote too....keep it up, you have a great mind and a pair of good hands that bring out the words..that post this poem up for all to see..this poem is GOOD!!!
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Thank you so much =]
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this was a great write and i enjoyed reading this..it was a really great write and it flowed really well as well keep writting your really talented
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Well thats good, Because frankly i don't like peanuts either
This poem is, Yay. I love it, It's so dirty gritty pretty great write
Thanks for entering
The title suits this well, and i love what you did with it!
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Hi... Thanks for the comment. I really enjoyed this poem!!! Very funny- but oh so true!!!
I love the way the poem has been written its very original(",) Great use of punctuation. I loved this!!!!!
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'They love girls that are easy to play with
((And you know e/x/a/c/t/l/y what I mean))
Pull you this way ----->
<------ Push you that
>>In and out.<< Up and down.
You know every single position…'
love that^^^^ amazing =] great write =]
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*jaw-drop*
You are -amazing-
this is probably one the best pieces ive read all day.
your imagery is intense.
keep it up doll, your good at what you do
♥♥♥
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this is amazing x
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this is really cool. I loved the look and how you did the pushed this way and that way. Your words are honest and truthful relating to somepeople I know and knew. Brava
NoL
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ahhh, a loving ode to the pretty blond plaything whos name and number humbly resides in countless bathrooms. love it
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hahahaha kinky i like it xp
PrettyX
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