A Place In our world in our minds
There a place that people go to but some never return from this place
Lies lead the people in but the truth leads them out
The place is known as the DARK FOREST
We enter this place since we are looking for answer but all we see the lives were lost to the forest search for a while or a long time all it wants is your life
If you die in a dark forest then your body is left there or in the river of lost and despair
In the river blood flow as some parts of the bodies stay there like rocks
The forest messes with your mind and gets you to believe the wrong and hope that you give up
At the end if you want just to leave but feel strong horsemen of black fire will chase you back in and hope they kill you other lives the still alive will either help you or destroy you
But at the end If you make it out alive you can be thankful but you feel bad bout the people left behind in the forest
A contest entry
- ~Darkest Of Dark~ by XxMysticalFantasyxX.
450 points, ended April 30, 2007, 23 entries
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600 points, ended April 24, 2008, 17 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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dark
Very creative write, I think we've all wandered into this forest at some point. Fits well with the contest.
Thanks for entering!
*~Huntress~*
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Great write. Wonderful emotional context. Nice construction and flow. Kept my attention and allowed for individual perspective. Enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for the read.
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this is a really good poem.....dark,yes,but really good. you have some seriuos talent...It's a but morbid, and yadayadayada....but I really like your work....It's amazing..you write kinda like my idol,Shakespearee....great job. Keep writing!
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Great poem thanks for entering this contest
Good luck...theres a few spelling mistakes just letting you know if you would lake to change it.
LadyMoonMistress
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