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Dark forest

A Place In our world in our minds
There a place that people go to but some never return from this place
Lies lead the peolpe but the truth leads them out
The place is known as the DARK FOREST

We enter this place since we are looking for answer but all we see the lives were lost to the forest search for a while or a long time all it wants is ur life

 

If you die in a dark forest then ur body is left there or in the river of lost and despair

In the river blood flow as som,e parts of the bodies stay there like rocks

 

The forest mess with your mind get you to belive the wrong and hope that you give up

At the end if you want just  to leave but feel strong horsemen of black fire will chase you back in and hope they kill you other lives the still alive will either help you or destroy you

 

But at the end If you make it out alive you can be thankful but you feel bad bout the people left behind in the forest

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  • Sagara-Sozou
    May 14, 2007
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    Oooooh, Dark and Scary. I love it.


  • LadySatineTundra
    May 11, 2007
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    >Shivers and looks upset<

    My forest is my home, oh my this made me feel so frightened and so alone.

    I can hear the wind howling and the darkness overwhelming. The haunting cries of being alone.

    But I delight in the forest playing with ones mind.
    For as dark fey watch, they test and tease as they please.

    And it is in their forests, one may never return.

    Loved it!

    Satine


  • kyo kurai kori
    April 23, 2007
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    *claps* very nice ^_^


  • Blossom
    April 23, 2007

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    This place you speak of sounds familiar to me. lol. Very nice, but I felt that at times you confused me a bit. Maybe you should work on grammar and punctuation. Overall very nice and descriptive. Thank you for entering.