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Honesty: the best policy

You have tied me up.
Locked me in.
Gripped so tight.
I am drowning.

You want me to be a kid.
Forever.
I want you to be my dad.
For once.

But you forced this.
All the lies.
I am happy.
I love you still.

I will fake it.
A smile forms.
My eyes glisten.
It's all for you.

But it's not what I wanted.
You drove me to this.
I blame you.
And not because it is easier.

I blame you simply because.
It’s the truth.
And somehow with that.
I don’t want to lie anymore.

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  • Speaking in Tongues
    April 18, 2007
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    Hits home, very strongly. Thank you very much for this great entry.


    • sarahbeth190
      April 18, 2007
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      it was my pleasure.
      I'm sorry if you can relate, but I'm glad that it wasn't completely pointless. ha. thanks for having such a great contest ^-^