[Step into a fairy ring]
Experience scents heady and thick
Their intoxication makes you sick
Proud English tophats can’t compare
To magical gowns, gossamer and fair
[And find out what it’s like to live]
Twirl through those bodies white, blue, and green
Tangle yourself in hair layered with a moonlight-sheen
Tales of these people have been told throughout the years
That’s why they hide, hunters praying on their fears
[Don’t eat those honey-cakes, for they don’t make you wiser]
Come back to me my dear, the time to play is done
I know you were jubilant, basking in the fun
But now is the time to return to reality
Now it is time to face the normality...
[even though you don’t want to]
Author notes
heyheyhey!
tis is my first poem having anything to do with fairies!
tell me what you think!
this is my first fairy-poem. tell me what's what!
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mmm......
Twirl through those bodies white, blue, and green
Tangle yourself in hair layered with a moonlight-sheen
Very nice!(ah I sound like borat!) -
[Don’t eat those honey-cakes, for they don’t make you wiser]
Come back to me my dear, the time to play is done
I know you were jubilant, basking in the fun
But now is the time to return to reality
Now it is time to face the normality...
[even though you don’t want to]
I love love love it doll!!!
You always make me smile with your comments!!!
thank you so so so so much hunny!!
this is an amazing write, you are so talented!!
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beautiful.
[Don’t eat those honey-cakes, for they don’t make you wiser]
♥ that line.
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Proud English tophats can’t compare
To magical gowns, gossamer and fair
Tangle yourself in hair layered with a moonlight-sheen
[Don’t eat those honey-cakes, for they don’t make you wiser]
Once again love, I'm am amazed. This is beautiful and you portrayed faeries well. I picked out my favourite bits...I love the imagery and the last line really ties it all up. Ces't Magnifique!!!!
Tres Bon!!!
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hmmmmmmmmmmm
good job! -
babyyyyy....
i really like this one.
Experience scents heady and thick
Their intoxication makes you sick
Proud English tophats can’t compare
To magical gowns, gossamer and fair
love this stanza, it creates really great imagery.
good job with this one bbydoll.
your loving wifey,
~*Rx Queen*~
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delicious
very interesting..i liked the parentheses throughout the poem
your pretty little whore
-xshotx
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I like it
I think you did an excellent job for your first time writing a poem such as this one
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