When angels put their wings to flight
bringing you a soothing peace
They’ll soar to you with all their might
coaxing burdens to release
Bringing you a soothing peace
on wings of angels, through His grace
Coaxing burdens to release
holding you in loves embrace
On wings of angels, through His grace
a sense of rapture fills your day
Holding you in loves embrace
keeping all the bad away
A sense of rapture fills your day
angelic friends to hold your hand
Keeping all the bad away
helping your mind to understand
Angelic friends to hold your hand
comforting words to ease the pain
Helping your mind to understand
sheltering you from falling rain
Comforting words to ease the pain
touched by angels from on high
Sheltering you from falling rain
catching teardrops as you cry
Touched by angels from on high
they’ll soar to you with all their might
Catching teardrops as you cry
when angels put their wings to flight
Author notes
My prayers are with you and your family...
In a list
A contest entry
- Uplifting Poems Desperately Needed by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended May 3, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you Dove for taking the time to write something for my wellbeing. Coming back to find all these words from such loving souls has deeply touched me.
Vickie -
Such a sothing, beautiful piece that soars. You did this poetry form justice, Dove.


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This is lovely, a true masterpiece. You have embraced the style and penned it with class. Your chosen verbiage is fluidic and your meter is on target. I love Pantoums but they can sound childish if not written well. You have composed a wonderful image that takes my mind on a vacation. Well done.
You are now wondering who I am! Well you were the first person to welcome me to Ap when I joined December 24th. Since then I have been teaching children formal poetry here on Ap in my “elf forest” group. Thanks to you I had the confidence to plow ahead in the Ap community. Thank you!
Love,
Amera


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Amera, thank you so very much for the comment and applause. I am honored that you remembered me and it was my pleasure to welcome you aboard. I am thrilled to hear about your group and that all you do. Thank you
Dove
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I love this poem!! it is very well written!! I love reading about angels...they make he remeber he cousins who past away and it gives me confort knowing that other people believe in them also!!! But this did make me feel warm inside and i loved reading this! i would love reading more from you! GREAT write!
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Beauty is king in this poem, very sweet and uplifting
I wish you all the best


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oh dove..this is just beautiful.And I hope your poem will make the difference in their lives, help them...
XXJeannette


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Beautiful!! I love this style(can never seem to write it) and it just flows so wonderfully. Very spiritual and comforting.
Thank you so much for your entry and good luck
Storm
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