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Believe


Have you ever fallen
as a blazing comet, or
a gentle leaf, or
as desperately hopeful feelings
fall gently on compassionate hearts,

and thus expelled your fears
so that you may perhaps

believe?

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i've done better... but for some odd reason i still desire to throw this hat in the ring...

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  • DancingRed
    April 24, 2007

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    Yes, contentedness is a most sweet experience. You've expressed beauty and joy with your words, and I feel there's still doubt - 'you may perhaps believe'. A compelling question to ask.
    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.