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You want crap, ill give you crap.

poop poop ba doop
crappity crap crap
juggle a penguin
set smokey on fire
play in the garbage
poop poop ba doop
theres a bearded lady in my eye
and it's tickling my ear
i roll on the floor
crappity crap
you want poop ill give you poop
you want crap ill give you crap
but dont ask for both...
it makes my butt hurt

<- my spiral to insanity

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  • darkeyes08
    May 22, 2007
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    O.O weirddd


  • Lamia
    April 18, 2007
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    haha..Unfourtunately I think this poem is too good for the contest in which it finds itself.
    "theres a bearded lady in my eye
    and it's tickling my ear" I loved that line...no particular reason...It just sounded cool. Anyhoo...an amusing poem and good luck in the contest
    P.S. Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem.


  • Shade Aurelia
    April 17, 2007
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    Fluffy....that's scary. You're a butt poo. *kicks you then runs away*


    Shade


  • Bohemianwriter
    April 16, 2007
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    ehm..............yeah this is gd..sort of...lol i dnt understand...who wants crap?


  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    we didn't want crap.... but there ya go....

    some people just don't understand irony and sarcasm....

    oohh well

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