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Left With Pensive Tears

A forgotten story my life does seem
I've forgotten to search for my feelings
In the depths of my soul
They are lost.
And I'm left with pensive tears
Possessing in my mind scars.
Scattered distant memories
Are all now I have
Fallen in the land of numbness
I'm lying beneath all my pains cold and motionless.

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PICTURE 1
Words Used
1. mystery
2. forgotten
3. depths
4. scars
5. soul
6. fallen
7. left
8. scattered
9. tears
10. distant

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  • perdisbeaute
    April 21, 2007
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    emotional and touching. I really felt and liked this one!

    Thanks for entering!