She is walking away
Leaving behind all the rules and all the binding threads,
All the shining glittering lies of life she leaves behind.
Life waits for her spreading its arms towards her with all grandeur
But she takes her eyes away from life
Its been too late to return.
A contest entry
- Walking Away - One Day Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended April 17, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have never figured out if my walking away was best or hardest.... ty for your entry.
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It's sad not to accept the invitation of life, very pessimistic!
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Thanks for commenting honey and you've rightly caught the tone of the poem.
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