Where oh where are my shoes and hose
Where oh where can they be
Did someone steal them from under my nose
Where oh where are my shoes and hose
Why didn't they take all my clothes
It"s surely a mystery
Where oh where are my shoes and hose
Where oh where can they be
Author notes
Little Bunny Foo Foo hopping through the forest
A contest entry
- Odd Is My Middle Name.... by Vera Jewel.
425 points, ended April 23, 2007, 9 entries
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hahah!! this is great
i love it.. very funny.. well done with this one
very well penned
thanks for entering,
and best of luck in the contest!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
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Bill, delightful as always.. I loved it!
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a rather strange write but i find nothing wrong with that good luck in the contest/s sur ehope you find those shoes soon
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Cute Poem!!
Good luck in the contest! 
Peace, xx Cyn 
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Hee-hee-hee, this made me giggle! It was very funny, especially the way you made shoes the star of the poem!(things that, for some, are interesting, but for me- most definately not).
I would have a suggestion, though. Punctuation. Where is the punctuation? Did it get lost with the shoes? LOL! Just try rephrasing it so you add the commas, and all the stuff. I will try, but it's just my way of punctuating it. So here we go:
" 1. Where, oh, where are my shoes and my hose?
2. Where, oh, where can they be?
3. Did someone steal them from under my nose?
4. Where, oh, where are my shoes and hose?
5. Why didn't they take all my clothes?
6. It's surely misterious.
7. Where, oh, where are my shoes and hose?
8. Where, oh, where can they be...? "
You will also notice I added some other words, where I felt they were needed. Thank you for entering, and best of luck!
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A bit on the Dr. Seuss-ie side.. I didn't really like this poem but still thank you for entering.
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