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Happy Birthday to You ! (Sung to Happy Birthday to You)

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Happy Birthday to you
You're a fan of U2
Happy Birthday dear Cheryl
Happy Birthday to you

Happy Birthday to you
You're talented that's true
Happy Birthday dear poet
Happy Birthday to you

Happy Birthday to you
An Aussie are you
Happy Birthday special Lady
Happy Birthday to you

Happy Birthday to you
The gift I'd bring you
A room full of roses
Happy Birthday to you

Happy Birthday to you
My sincere wish is true
All the best for your Birthday
And the rest of life too

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  • angelica silver member
    April 20, 2007

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    Dear Julie, it sings perfectly to the "Happy Birthday song" You've written a wonderful poem and put a smile on my face. *smile*
    Joan


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Oooh Yeah!!! Creative, thoughtful, just an all round fabulous Birthday write. You are just too good at these and love this one for Cannonsfire.
    Best wished for this contest
    Cuz


  • hopelessly-broken
    April 17, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwww.... so sweet
    wonderfully done!!

    luv you
    XoXoXoX


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 17, 2007

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    Oh this is just eally wonderful and precious I sang along to 'Happy Birthday' it fits so well. I can see Cheryl loves it as well!
    All the best in the contest
    Mum x x x x
    Gaylene


  • sublimewriter
    April 16, 2007

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    what a sweet and endearing write. keep up the good workk in your writing. i like the last part about wishing for the best in your birthday.


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    April 16, 2007
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    Thats the nicest version of Happy Birthday I have ever had, thank you so much

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