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A Little Emo Inside Me

There’s a little emo hiding inside me.
I keep her hidden but sometimes she breaks free.
I try to hold her back but all she sees is the pain,
all the wrongs done to me.

There’s a little emo hiding inside me.
She shrinks away when everything’s good
But she comes out when I need her
When things aren’t always as they should

There’s a little emo hiding inside me.
I love her and I’m glad she’s there.
Although we may not always agree
I know she’s there because she really does care.

Author notes

I'm not emo - not all the time but i do think there is a little emo inside me and everyone. This can be a good thing but not everyone seems to think so. but to me its good to have an emo inside - but thats just me, im sure there are alot of emo haters out there would would disagree with me.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    June 18, 2007

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    Very Nice

    I really liked this poem alot and I agree with you whatever emp is and stands for we all must have it in us haha. any ways this is an awesome poem and I really love how this flows and goes. any ways congratulations on bronze as well I bet that taste like chocolate any ways good poem all round and keep up the good work


  • CherylAnn
    May 15, 2007

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    Congratulations on Bronze

    a write worthy of a trophy for sure.I believe you are right though,for when we get in a state of mind that is emotional then the emo comes out loud and proud.You have penned a great write on the subject...
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~


  • theghostofher
    April 17, 2007

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    this is a great poem. i have a emo side but it seems like its the one everyone can see. i hope you keep writing your really good.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    April 17, 2007
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    its really good
    its like me
    good job baby


  • emochik666
    April 16, 2007

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    love it

    I agree with I have the same thing at scool everybody gives me a hard time because sometimes i'm like an emo but I don't care I love your poem i hope one day you could look at mine

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