I keep her hidden but sometimes she breaks free.
I try to hold her back but all she sees is the pain,
all the wrongs done to me.
There’s a little emo hiding inside me.
She shrinks away when everything’s good
But she comes out when I need her
When things aren’t always as they should
There’s a little emo hiding inside me.
I love her and I’m glad she’s there.
Although we may not always agree
I know she’s there because she really does care.
Author notes
I'm not emo - not all the time but i do think there is a little emo inside me and everyone. This can be a good thing but not everyone seems to think so. but to me its good to have an emo inside - but thats just me, im sure there are alot of emo haters out there would would disagree with me.
A contest entry
- The other side of the Coin. by Never.Give.Up.
450 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Very Nice
I really liked this poem alot and I agree with you whatever emp is and stands for we all must have it in us haha. any ways this is an awesome poem and I really love how this flows and goes. any ways congratulations on bronze as well I bet that taste like chocolate
any ways good poem all round and keep up the good work
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Congratulations on Bronze
a write worthy of a trophy for sure.I believe you are right though,for when we get in a state of mind that is emotional then the emo comes out loud and proud.You have penned a great write on the subject...
Blessings
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this is a great poem. i have a emo side but it seems like its the one everyone can see. i hope you keep writing your really good.
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its really good
its like me
good job baby -
love it
I agree with I have the same thing at scool everybody gives me a hard time because sometimes i'm like an emo but I don't care I love your poem i hope one day you could look at mine





