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I wish......

Please dont leave me on the outside
I wish to not be thrown aside
I wish to be open with you
And I want you to do that too
See, leaving me here just guessing only hurts me
All the speculating and wondering kills me
Please know I care about you with all my heart
And I wish that we wouldnt be torn apart
I feel alot for you. Many feelings so wide
That I wish to not hide
But if what I feel cannot be greater as was before
Then speak to me and we can be friends forever more
Ignoring and avoiding me hurts me intensely
Its something I wish to end greatly
You are a beautiful light, inside and out
Something I wish to not be away from no doubt
There may have been times where you thought that to not be true
But I have always thought that way about you
I will always be here whenever you need me
Always ready to listen whenever need be
Please do not forgot these words that I say
Because they are true in every way

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  • SammyJo
    April 16, 2007

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    great

    o wow this is so sweet i love it i hope you and this person work this all out and all be this is a great poem youve really put so much effort in this and it really shows alot of emotion and love and all but keep the work up good job. . .


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    This is such a lovely heartfelt poem. I can feel your emotions coming out of this so intensly. Great write and well done for this lovely read.