My eye of death
My eye of life
So take a breath
And stroke a knife
Across your skin
So sweet, so pure
Let death begin
So premature
Don't laugh, don't cry
Just end the strife
And see my eye
Of death, of life
A contest entry
- ~Darkest Of Dark~ by XxMysticalFantasyxX.
450 points, ended April 30, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have always loved your work.
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Its short and simple, but powerful. It's a good poem and I wish you luck in the contest!
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This is a really short poem but really great, so morbid, so dark...freaky! You are a great wr Thanks for entering this contest and good luck
LadyMoonMistess
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