Sticks and stones may break my bones
But whips and chains excite me
They set me free
And bring to me
A state of ecstasy
That lets me be me
Tie me up
Hold me down
Take my mind and turn it ‘round and ‘round
Do what only you can do
Just make sure you do it right
Tie the rope just so tight
Bring me from darkness into a
Powerful light
Of desire
That’s a consuming fire
Whip me
Spank me
Take me
Dominate me
From head to toe
I want to know
The full extent of your intent
And have no doubt of what you meant
To do
When you do
What you do best
Borrowing a line within this rhyme
I’m so excited
I just can’t hide it
I’m about to lose control and
I think I like it
Oh yes, this is not a test
This is an emergency message
To all that need to hear it
Sticks and stones may break my bones
But whips and chains?
Excite me baby
Spare no details, tell me exactly what you think about this ....
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Impressive and sensual. Good job. Bro-n-law. Nice flow as well.
-theQueen"
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You're the bestest!!
Thanks for the support hun!!!
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Whew! Rabbit, it's too early in the morning for me to read this, the old man is already gone to work!
Great rhythm and rhyme to your words. Powerful topic done justice with excellent flow. It's a pleasure to read your pleasure!
~Lori
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Thank you!
Glad you liked it! The pleasure is mine!!
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WOW
I really enjoyed this sweetheart, but wished you'd told me b4 all these women saw it first
Smooches
Ephiphany
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I'm sowwy .....
... forgive me!!
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OH, WOW!!!!
All the pleasure that you call to my mine
mmmmmmmmmmoans yea
Roses to you
Teresa
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Moan it sweetheart.....
Thanks!!
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The pleasure is in the pain....just beginning to learn that...
Soulful Woman
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Isn't it though?
Glad you liked it ....
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Good Write.
Whip me, spank me, make me write bad checks...lol..
too hot to handle...
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That's right YOU'RE hot!!
"Make me write bad checks"!!! Hilarious!!
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Heart Pounding...
"Oh yes, this is not test:...Dont you mean..."this is not "a" test?"
Ummm as for the piece itself....mmmmm...exciting..a little too much for my style though
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This is why you are so special, you catch the little things that mean so much!!
Fixed it!!
Love ya!!
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