I send you words,
to stack up in the corners,
all over your home.
Because I know you
Love to write!
Singing you happy birthday
Just was not enough
So I hope the words
Will do
They aren't hard to wrap
All will fly through the air
Be at your house in the morning
Of your birthday
I hope this is enough
For I am lost for idea's
But I have read alot
Of your words
So it seemed to me
That you just might run out!
Of course I send hugs
((((((())))))
With many wishes
Hope you enjoy
Happy Birthday!
In a list
A contest entry
- They Say It's My Birthday! by Cannonsfire.
600 points, ended April 29, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hello pruedence. this is an awsome poem, i like the imagery in the first stanza, and i like how throughout you make words into something tangable, something you can touch, not just forms on a page. thanks for sharing, good job as always. Tim
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What a great gift to send someone who writes! lol. Nice, happy gift. Nice poem. I liked it.
Good luck in your contest.
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Words are good enough for a writer lol, always using quite a few so send em over and thank you
Love, C
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I liked the humour about you reading a lot of the words so they might run out
This was a lovely birthday poem. Good luck
Thanks for your comment
Pozo
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