Endless piles of paper, more like jail than work everyday.
The little yellow reminders everywhere,
I found one on the ass of my pants today.
So I cut a hole in my desk and let my keyboard tell the tale.
...Yours truly...
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five lines about this pic.
A contest entry
- 5 lines and a picture ~ winner takes all by Grey Mouser.
500 points, ended April 17, 2007, 20 entries
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Wow
Lmao I vcan fele the pent up rage and frustratuion through out this poem but I really loved how well you penned this vent poem too. any ways a very well rounded awesome poem and keep on penning these awesome poems
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yup, thats work for ya, lol.
i not only like this, i agree with this completely, considering im sitting at a school computer. in the library. the singular most prison like place on earth, other than an office cubicle... SHCOOL! *dun-dun-duun*
but anyways, this was really cool, i only just realised by reading this poem you have a reather unique style of writing, which is awesome cause new stuff is really hard to come by nowadays.
i would applaud tou thrice more, but it is unfortunate that i am saving up for a contest and im out... meh what the heck... you deserve it
*claps*
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Lol...indeed it does..
And thank you so much Your a sweetie! I like to be myself when I write..and I have a hard time with conforming to and adhering to rules and specifics...I can only write as I know. Otherwise I come out with nothing that is desirable to read. Grins*
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LOL, the saws-all strikes back. Sounds like an entertaining way of telling the company to take a long walk off a short pier. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
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You got it...Either that or I'd pull a Milton from office space
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hits the spot
hehee.......know EXACTLY what you mean! There are millions of people in jobs they cant stand. Luckerrrly
I love my job. 5 great lines, I pictured you at the desk with a chainsaw...
well done an good luck
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indeed...with a big grin on my face as I rev it up one last time. 
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