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Candy Hearts

I live in a world of candy hearts
With tears and sweet treats
With smiles
With frowns
My dream is a world of candy hearts

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Candy hearts, one of my favorite candies. It's probanly because of the words, though they taste pretty good too. So, it's short and sweet.

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  • Merci
    May 1, 2007
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    Awwwwe. Thats cute. I like it a lot

  • DarkRomantic113
    April 16, 2007

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    Witty and Whimsical

    "Remember when girls meant cooties, and friends were new dreams un-shattered, worries were few, recess was too short, and life was too long. Decisions came easy, and there was no need to belong, storks delivered babies, and passions weren't strong. Friendships were true, and we knew right from wrong, bad things didn’t happen, and only boo-boo's brought tears, the night-light never went out, and mom erased fears, farewell meant just for the summer, friends didn’t part, the fun went on forever..."-Unknown

    Your poem reminded me of the transition from elementary school to middle school. We started to learn that life wasn't games, yet something inside of us wished it could be. Then somewhere along the line, we exchanged candy hearts for broken hearts, treats for tears, and frowns for smiles. Nice write.