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Gentle Whispers

As dawn breaks and the sun peeps through
He is still dreaming of those wondrous times with you
Of idyllic days of love and romance
As a breath of wind makes the tulips dance
The touch of your hair, your beautiful smile
To be with you, I will go the extra mile
Valkyrie, Goddess of the Norse
To love you goes without remorse
Strong valiant like the wind and sea
Show me your strength for this is my plea
Ail not my sweet love, open wide those eyes
Look around I am with you I hear not your sighs
Just Gentle whispers of your undying love
Which is sent from the Great God above

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  • Night Valkyrie
    May 4, 2007

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    Thank you for the wonderful words and spiritual uplifting. It was very kind and I am grateful for the thoughts.

    Vickie


  • Shakes-spear
    April 22, 2007

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    Love is wonderful

    Your feelings really show in this write. Great job, someone is lucky to have you and we are lucky to read your heart! The Shaker


    • nansie
      April 23, 2007
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      Thank you

      Dear Shakes-spear, I am extremely lucky to have so many people in my life, all whom are very special, I try to write from my heart, and put myself in their place, those whom are hurting,
      Love light and Peace
      Always
      Nansie


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    April 16, 2007

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    A beautifully soft piece. I can feel this lift her spirits back up to the place she rightfully belongs.

    Thank you so much for your entry and good luck
    Storm