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1st Rodeo

My first rodeo
I rode my horse
He had rode before
But not with me
We went and
He freaked
He just ran around the arena
I left upset
My dad went and
Payed so I could run again
We ran and
We did OK
Didn't win
But it was fun
Of course it was sad then
But now days when I look back
I just laugh
When I watch the tape
I laugh

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Written July 16th, 2003

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  • SilverxXxShadow
    July 19, 2003
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    lol...it's great how we all can look back on things and laugh at ourselves. I love doing that so much. Anyways, this is a cute write...I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for entering...Good luck.

    ~Shadow


  • White Dragon
    July 17, 2003
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    aww..how cute
    lol
    talk to you later