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Famous Last Words

I know that I can't stop you
I know that no matter what I say
That you will never be here
I know you will walk away
Are you sure that I can't stop you?
Because I'd perfer it if you stayed
You know that no matter what
I'll love you anyway

Chorus
And these may be
The last words I ever say
But promise me
You'll listen anyway
I just want you to know
That even as you leave
I still love you and
I know that I will never grieve
Because I'm too strong
And even without you
I know I'm never wrong

Now I have a thirst insatiable
And its for you my loved one
Your love is so demanding
But thats what makes it fun
And don't try leaving
I'll beat you to the gun
I will be better with out
But its better if you run

Chorus
And these may be
The last words I ever say
But promise me
You'll listen anyway
I just want you to know
That even as you leave
I still love you and
I know that I will never grieve
Because I'm too strong
And even without you
I know I'm never wrong

Author notes

My Immortal soul lives forever
Option 1: Song Titles: Famous Last Words MCR

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  • Darkened Seraph
    April 16, 2007

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    this is a good song, I like what you have done using the title, it has a great flow throughout it and a very interesting rhyme structure if it is one i can see well done and good luck in the contest