I sit to let the particles bombard my mind
for a while, for a time
to lose time
to lose control
and lose my grip
on so called, so old reality
Mr. Rogers taught us to absorb
and to spit out
admitted
it was all true
important we know how to make crayons
dissassemble the neutron bomb
Please tell me what you think
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This is really good! I really like the first line. Great write!
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Thanks, it's a play on particle bombardment televisions.
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This is great.
I love the last two lines.
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