For what do I see,
but a bright colored flower
a gothic discrace.
I raise my black boot,
to send it to Hell and back,
and crush that bright thing.
I feel of no guilt
for I have done a good deed
for the gothic race.
Author notes
OFF WITH THEIR HEADS!!!
A contest entry
- The Technique of Mixing It Up by azure85.
790 points, ended May 1, 2007, 24 entries
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the goth rests in the sod
irises rise triumphant heads
-vengance out of hell
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you're prejudice against flowers, you dirty flowerist
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Oh, very interesting entry. Your author notes remind me of the Queen of Hearts.....LOL
Sorry, no haiku chains. If you want to select one to stand alone and enter, I will come back and comment.
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aw man!
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why not!?!
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The flower is not a terrible thing, for it represents only what you want. Beyond that, it has no other quality but aesthetic. Can one truly destroy something of beauty? One day, one person may see you as a thing of beauty (or something like it). Would you want someone to trample you underfoot?
Sorry, I seem to do this a lot when I comment. *silent* ERK SPLEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Anyway, simple and clean (good song by the way), nothing more than the bare facts. Not what I would usually read, but I did so too little too late. Keep the ink flowing, even if I don't understand anything.
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lol, but becarful when you kill one four more pop in it's place, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This is interesting,what do you have against brightly coloured flowers?
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tch...duh.im emo.does the name "Emos Shadow" mean anything to you?
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a.k.a...goth that cuts him/herself?
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