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I Need You

My very best friend
from the age of five,
I don't know what I would do
without your unbiased love

I don't know how I would
have ever learned how to love
You taught me love
on every level...

You are my heart and I am so glad
I am able to find you again
I need you and I love you
even though we parted ways,
you are the lights on my path
to salvation

You are the smiles
to my salvation

You taught me that I could sin
and be truly forgiven
You taught me that I could love,
and be loved back

You taught me,
and helped me,
when I needed it the most,
and thank you.

Just a sweet thank you,
to you,
my very best friend,
that taught me so much....

I love you,
and I hope you love me back.....

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  • star wars fanatic
    April 19, 2007

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    :)

    I really like it. It seems to fit two of my oiptions as I write many poems like this, but I do really like it. Umm, why did my computer try to hide it form me for erotica? *finalist*


  • JenP
    April 15, 2007
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    May everyone know a love like that. Beautiful.