one
desire,
simple wish,
a big limo
pulls up to your house,
I jump out with the girls,
a special night on the town,
cruising to the concert of dreams,
screeching to halt at theatre’s door,
where U-2 is waiting for your presence.
On bended knee, Bono kisses your hand,
escorting you to the reserved chair,
in front of the stage where each song,
is sung to you, while we scream
for your birthday, of course,
and the hunks onstage
wink for your day
Happiest
Birthday
Sis’!
Author notes
Double Etheree
Oh, I liked this thought alot!
Graphic: http://www.mtv.com/news/photos/u/u2_photoexhibit_100905/flip_u2_three_getty.jpg
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A contest entry
- They Say It's My Birthday! by Cannonsfire.
600 points, ended April 29, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations on the gold, i received silver and was more than delighted. you really deserved it with this subject that is soclose to her heart.
slan Dolores x
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I really liked this birthday greeting when I first read it
sooooo Congratulations on your award :
hugz
Tearz -
It is incredible how you manage to keep such natural, seemingly 'effortles' flow in such a demanding form of poetry - I truly admire that...
Is there a place for me in that limo and a seat in that concert? pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease??????
rachel
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What a birthday indeed
I will be stash my self in the trunk lol..
wonderful birthday write,
Warm thoughts
Tearz -
YOU LIKE IT ALOT ARGHHHHHH!!! LMAO, get that limo and I'll move heaven and earth to get there LOL, bless your heart what a birthday that would be
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