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Great Horned Majesty

Great Horned Owl
With eyes of glass
Through the night
You're on the hunt

You hear the rodents
Ears so sharp
Killing your meals with
Precision, accuracy, and ease

You're a mighty bird
With grace and glory
your feathers so smooth
They make you shine

Call a lover
For only sometime
You give birth
With a clutch range of three

Great Horned majesty

Hold your head high

Spread your wings

Soar with the wind

 

 



 

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www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Horned_Owl
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  • Kevan
    April 24, 2007
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    Wow, definitely an expression of your love towards the great horned owl. Your research stood out clear in this piece and the elegance is truly wonderful. I really like this and think you'll do well in the contest. Good luck in the future rounds

    ~Kevan~


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    April 20, 2007

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    This was a lovely poem. I think it would make the poem appear more elegant if you spelling out the word "three". Otherwise I think this is a beautiful portrait of this bird.


  • Ryno
    April 19, 2007

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    Wow. Really interesting, but majestic flow which matches your topic. Trés beautiful. Good research. Good luck!
    ~Ryan~