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The Heated Hearth of Healing - Silver

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birdsong dry days
bald-headed cactus sweltering
in brittle bits of sand
where shade eludes scuttling things
searching for a damp place to be

sage sky simmers
over places man will not walk
but to collect medicine
for another heat
on the forehead of a child

leathery leaves turn hard faces
to boney-brindled cattle
and rough-ribbed horses
stumbling hot-brained
around twirling tumbleweed

a wrinkled hand drops tobacco
at hairy roots and offers a raspy song
about water and gratitude
and even for a desert
that can hold healing
in a gray un-needy clutch

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 28, 2007

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    Fantastic! This piece, I adore! The imagery is grand, it tells a story and the spirituality of it shines. Impressively done. Thanks for entering the contest.


  • sahdana
    April 15, 2007

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    lovely...absolutely stunning

    nice, very lovely and absolutely stunning-the words capture the essence...well done! peace & blessings


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 15, 2007
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    "where shade eludes scuttling things
    searching for a damp place to be

    sage sky simmers
    over places man will not walk"

    Gorgeous descriptions, my Sister...This is a healing poem, overflowing with recuperative powers...Good luck in Gypsy's contest, my Friend... Wanda


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      April 28, 2007
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      I am off for dinner this evening... but will be back alter this evening. I hope your day was sage-sweet.

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