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Always Been

Have always been the
Girl trying to be quiet
And nice
Mostly sugar
Not a lot of spice

Have always been the
Lonely girl without
Someone to hold
Always thought that road
Was a bit oversold

Have always been the
Crazy chick who
Would speak her mind
And never ever
Give in

Have always been the
Girl looking straight ahead
Afraid to see the damage
She was leaving
In her wake

Have always been the
Girl questioning
If she was good enough
To be loved
By you.

Have always been the
Girl rumors were created
About
Must have been
Nothing better to do

Have always been the
Girl trying to hide
Behind a smile
Even when the world was
Crashing into a wall

Have always been the
Girl waiting right here
For you to come around.
Only to see- you never will
Will You?

I guess I have always been
And will always be
The girl everyone likes
But nobody loves
With a smile outside
And tears inside
Watching you walk away
When all I want is you
To stay.

Author notes

2007

Written over many weeks. I have not been in the writing mood. I have been too tired/busy to sit down and write something.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    June 1, 2007
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    wow that poem is so sad yet it kinda makes me feel happy that there is other people who are going threw the same thing i go threw i let my boyfriend throw me around because i love him he will break up with me and go out with all kinds of girls and when he gets tird of 1 night stands he comes back to me!!! sometimes i don't know what to do!!
  • pozo
    May 5, 2007
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    This was quite a sad poem with good use of rhyme
    Pozo


  • forever dreaming
    April 18, 2007

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    Hey, there are a few contests running at the minute that this would fit really well into. Here are a few links that might suit this poem.

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    It was a really good write, reminded me a lot of myself but believe me, there will be someone who will love you regardless.

    YOU are a girl with a talent.
    YOU are a girl with a heart.
    YOU are a girl with a future
    YOU'RE the girl who can make it start