The most memorable evening
Even with the scare of police
Nothing could bring us down
Four best friends wandering around
Teenagers, as we be.
Not bored, but looking for fun.
Through all the laughs
And the stereotypical munchies.
The philosophical moments in tow
Every way we looked, things were pretty chill.
So easy to distract teenagers
The ones who've been smoking pot, especially.
With blinking lights and glow in the dark stars...
Staring at the cieling is pretty easy.
The moments of sheer emotion
And utmost hilarity
We've seen some pretty great times together, old friends.
A contest entry
- How you feel about drugs by 6-Ft-UnDeR.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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Mught have fun during, but what about the aftermath? Sad what can happen to kids who try too much of this stuff - hope this does not become a habit - expensive as well as destructive. Sentiments easy to red and understand though in these lines - sentiments well expressed.
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Interesting piece my friend. Having never tried pot I would have to leave it up to your judgement as to it's effects. But I have seen some of the effects after a night of drugs can leave a person. I hope you are not writing from experience. Great work. You have alot of talent.
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