Soft sheets caressing my bare skin
As the heat of the sun
Warms my chilled body
White against bronze skin
I turn in your direction
My eyes staring from your feet
Up to your beautiful face
Taking the paints
I slowly paint the magnificence of your body
Each stroke is my love for you
Each line is my love lasting
My eyes hungry for you
My mind hungry for your love
My body hungry for the love we make
I slowly caressing your smooth cheeks
Taking my time to kiss your sensual lips
Tasting you
Teasing you
You are my love
You are my life
Author notes
My first erotic piece in a very long time I know it's different from all the others but, I hope that everyone will love it just the same.
"Neocaeczaristic" I'm 18 and over
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A contest entry
- LAST NIGHT... by Sunday Rain.
345 points, ended May 22, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensuality by Astrotriz.
1200 points, ended June 9, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful! Thanks for your entry and for following the rules.
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ok
I like this poem,
but you like to mention love,
but I'm actually aimin' for lust...
Still,
This is a good write!
& good luck! -
good
i like it its very sensual -
ooo... *chills* LOVED IT~! *sings*
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Thank you girl I glad that you liked it.
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This is a fantastic new side! I like it. The old side ids good, and so is this. Three bunnies!
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I did love this. I think that you did a wonderful job of writing this. I think that you did a good job with erotica and love. I liked that in this, most people only go for love or sex and you did both which I really liked.
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wow
This is a great poem, I love it. Awesome! -
WOW!! this is a great write and it's just a beautiful piece all round. Great Write.
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