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Lovely...No?

He sits in class
Thinking about that piece of
Ass he’s getting tonight

The teacher rambles on
He’s thinking he has to bone…
To stay alive.

Later that night
Everything seems to be alright
He has his plans all worked out

Meet in the barn
Staying out till dawn
Doing a naughty deed.

She brought the whips and chains
Knowing he likes the pain,
And it turns him on.

They do it all night
But they split before light
Wanting to keep this a secret.

No one must know that
She stole his soul, so he leaves
Promising to come back

While the day goes on
He’s back in class
And she goes back grazing...... on the
farmers grass.

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 25, 2007

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    ok, this is a kind of weird poem... hahaha. but it's cool. lol. good job! and good luck in this contest!

    Crimson


  • Paincalledlove
    May 30, 2007

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    Hey nice poem. but this is a bit to close to erotica. I dont want to put this questionable material in what could possibly be minors minds. (but i thought it was a good poem)


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 15, 2007
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    Yay lol it was very good! I really enjoyed reading it!!! excellent work! it was soooooooooo funny! and Im sure living in the south isnt that bad my girlfriend lives in the south and she likes it. anyway excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!!!





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