An endless tide of dreams
Rolls to slap shores of reality
Dragging sands of doubt
To the cerulean deep
Contaminating my sweet delusions
Author notes
sometime '06
Any comments are appreciated
Comments
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I like the idea behind this, our dreams clashing with reality, very nice write. Short and sweet, just how I like 'em.
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This was very deep but I loved it all the same. I liked the background as it kind of soothed the pain you feel after reading the poem itself. x
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Great use of imagery in such a short write. I like the way this is written. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest. Bravo
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amazing write. short and too the point. what you put into a few words what many could not do. I love it. great job!!!!!!!!!
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