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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!

Throw me down
Rip my clothes
Show me pleasure
Like no one knows

Grab my hair
Guide my head
Tell me what
You like in bed

Hold my wrists
So I don't touch
Come on baby
I'm not asking much

Flip me over
Every which way
Don't stop pushing
No matter what I say

Lick me here
Suck right there
Make my screams
Be heard everywhere

Just when I think
That we are through
Bend me over
And give all of you

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Ummmmmmmmmmm Yeah! Just kinda popped in my head!

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  • Happy3
    January 10
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    It is wonderful. really wonderful. You did a superb job. Well done, gorgeous lady!


  • leo2
    July 1, 2008

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    Mmmmmm I'm smiling at the thought. This is just one of those 'feel good' poems that is pure pleasure to read. It's fairly rare, too, to be in this form on this subject. I give you my applause and just a teenzy bit of envy...lol.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do truly appreciate it.


  • Lonely Christina
    April 22, 2008
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    omg ! wow hehe if i wasnt in the mood b4, i am now! lol


  • Endeavor gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    Ummmmmmmmm


    Like IT

    Rick


    • DenyMyLove
      June 20, 2007
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      LOL Thanks, Rick!!!! Sometimes the strangest things just pop into my head!!!!
      ~DAWN~


  • aceray
    June 14, 2007

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    Wow! just popped in your head huh?! Just a little 'blowing off steam' kind of poem! Yeah, I get those to! Nicely wriiten! I love your poetry!

    rey


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 16, 2007

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    Most excellent and most erotic! Whew! When thoughts like this pop into one's head, they just have to be acted upon, eh?
    Most enjoyable read!

    • DenyMyLove
      April 16, 2007
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      Thanks for commenting! And trust me, I agree, as soon as they popped in my head I wrote them down and let my significant other know just how I was feeling!
      ~DAWN~

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