Throw me down
Rip my clothes
Show me pleasure
Like no one knows
Grab my hair
Guide my head
Tell me what
You like in bed
Hold my wrists
So I don't touch
Come on baby
I'm not asking much
Flip me over
Every which way
Don't stop pushing
No matter what I say
Lick me here
Suck right there
Make my screams
Be heard everywhere
Just when I think
That we are through
Bend me over
And give all of you
Author notes
Ummmmmmmmmmm Yeah! Just kinda popped in my head!
Please tell me what you think
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It is wonderful. really wonderful. You did a superb job. Well done, gorgeous lady!


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Mmmmmm I'm smiling at the thought. This is just one of those 'feel good' poems that is pure pleasure to read. It's fairly rare, too, to be in this form on this subject. I give you my applause and just a teenzy bit of envy...lol.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do truly appreciate it.

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Thanks sooooo much for your nice comment!!!!
Dawn~
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omg ! wow hehe if i wasnt in the mood b4, i am now! lol
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Ummmmmmmmm
Like IT
Rick

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LOL Thanks, Rick!!!! Sometimes the strangest things just pop into my head!!!!
~DAWN~
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Wow! just popped in your head huh?! Just a little 'blowing off steam' kind of poem! Yeah, I get those to! Nicely wriiten! I love your poetry!
rey

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Thanks Rey!!!! You always say the nicest things!!!!
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Most excellent and most erotic! Whew! When thoughts like this pop into one's head, they just have to be acted upon, eh?

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Thanks for commenting! And trust me, I agree, as soon as they popped in my head I wrote them down and let my significant other know just how I was feeling!
~DAWN~
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