Your eyes are big
And so is your heart
You smell so good
When you fart
My love is as strong
As your butt is wide
I wish my love
I could in you confide
You can't imagine how much I suffer
My heart brakes
When you share you pancakes
With that girl that lives down the street
sniffle
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wow. i'm sorry! this must suck. this is really intense and the emotions were so strong! keep penning
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My love is as strong
As your bunny is wide
I wish my love
I could in you confide.
That's my favorite part of all.
I love the emotions you put into this it was like you and your pen were a match made in heaven, you can take anything and write about it with strong, powerful emotion.
I think you should hold writing classes and get this work published. I, just like everyone else would love to read your work over and over and over again.
It just brings happy tears to my eyes to see how such young children can write so easily. Like it just flows out of you. -
Wow..I need more tissues..Im crying..LOL
This was an interesting piece. Good job..
Soulful Woman
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yes. I'm very jealous.
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uh huh
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