When your life crumbles,
do you fall in?
When you have nothing to live for,
do you let yourself die from within?
When you're betrayed,
do you get revenge?
When your name is soiled,
do you avenge?
When you're ignored,
do you force them to hear you?
When you're argueing,
do you try to see their view?
When you know you're beat,
do you still fight?
When told you won't succeed.,
do you still try with all your might?
When you miss someone,
do you visit to say "hi"?
When told you're worthless,
do you die?
Please tell me what you think
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Love It!!!!!!
you wilded me with this piece of yours. i think i liked this one more than the other one i comment on. this is the most desired ((When your life crumbles,
do you fall in?
When you have nothing to live for,
do you let yourself die from within?)) for your age this is a surprise write.
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Devin, everyone is worried about you. I hope your okay. and you dont do anything stupid.
look twards your friends. because they are there for you. you are lucky to have good friends.
Remember when you helped me when i was cutting myself?
I love you. like the brother i never had
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This was really good. you're asking "Do You?" to the things many people think about doing, but never actually do, or in vise versa. I really liked this.
"When you're ignored,
do you force them to hear you?
When you're argueing,
do you try to see their view?"
this is my favorite stanza.
later,
+J+E+N+N+
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