I wish I could be seen by her.
I wish she knew how I felt about her.
If I could give anything just to get her to see me.
I would give my love, my heart, and my soul.
If she would just take a few days to think about it.
She would realize how I feel about her.
She would see the love of which I feel for her and only her.
She would see what kind of person I can be only to her.
There's no question in my mind that I like her.
If she would just give me a chance, I would show her what shes never felt.
I would try to give her what she needed, and wanted.
I would do what I could for her if only I could be in her eyes.
A contest entry
- Show me what you got! by SilentRose.
450 points, ended May 11, 2007, 18 entries
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what a cute little poem! Love is always a great subject to write about! and i can understand how you would feel in that case...i too have been in a case similar to that. good work!
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Clear message of love
I like the title you used.
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