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Label De Morte

All the scilence, the black unfurled
Changing ever constant,
Burgandy Blotches, mustard lines
Beryllium illisions in stagnant gems.
Whilst amber laden wings collapse-
Resonating in chaos.
Lost sounds to the hole,
She, the black hole...

Lathargic reposing upon a bed of deciet
Compased by saccharine vows,
Murky blotches, Indigo lines
Whispered delusions for shattered minds.
Whilst all the world falling dead collapse-
Resonating in chaos.
Lost souls to the hole,
She, the black hole...

All the wonder, the white disclosed
Consumed in vapour,
Orchid blotches, crimson lines
Catostophic inclusions with deadly ends.
Whilst fantasy and lunacy collapse-
Resonating in chaos.
Lost inside the hole,
She, the black hole...

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  • FleurdeSang
    July 21
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    Divinity in Darkness

    Morbidly delicious. I love your word choices, and the way you mixed them together. A rich, dark elegance permeating the night with gothic splendour. I share your sentiments with decay. It truly is beautiful... Wonderful piece. Hope to read more from you. And to take from hear her breathe- very wildly original, . Ta.

    A whisper from the shadows,

    ~S.


  • hear her breathe gold member
    April 15, 2007
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    Oh Deus! You're so great! I like your style...it's wildly original!!!

    • Muriel
      April 15, 2007
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      Oh, thanks!! I'm so very glad you like it

      Muriel