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I Fear the Night

I fear the night
for untold reasons;
many pertaining to you.
When the sun escapes
past the closing
door of horizon,
before I can shut
my oh so weary eyes,
your breath is
already hushing
against my ear.

I used to cherish
that sweet hot breath
carressing my skin,
but now that
I've been broken
and shattered,
I no longer hunger
for your touch.
Now I only
know--
to fear it.

There is no
such thing as rest
when you are
forcefully pressing
your body
against mine;
so unwillingly
wanted by me.
That coiling smile
of yours makes
me sick.

Your violation
swells so deep
inside my body--
I try to resist
but to no avail,
your hands are much
bigger than mine.
Red marks from
your filthy fingertips
are imprinted on
my skin--
and forever inside
my mind.

I'm past the point
of crying--
Considering it does
no good.
I'm on the edge
of dying,
From the sadness,
embarressment,
and hate.
But still,
I see you smile.

With a final thrust
of unruly brutality
you conclude
yet another
horrific nightmare.
You leave me
remembering the pain
and that repulsive
smile.
There are many
reasons why
I fear the night.

Author notes

I've personally never experienced rape, and I'm thankful for that, I'm sorry that anyone would have to go through this pain.

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 24, 2007

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    this was a great write and i can really relate to this poem..it is something no one should ever have to go through and it is a pain that haunts you anyways keep writting your very talented

    ~Chrissy~


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 19, 2007

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    thank you for your entry into this contest and i wish you the best of luck when judging time comes. viyanna rosemarie


  • silencethequestion
    April 15, 2007

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    I LOVE THis ONE. i can really relate to it and this has so much imagery and i love your writing. keep up the great work and thanks for entering my contest


  • Twins 4 me
    April 15, 2007
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    Very good write! Great imagery. This shows the dark reality that is rape.