the cure is still lost,
so this epidemic still rages on
-inside an empty head-
i'll spit bullets in the form of cynical words &
shoot lasers from envious eyes
if it'll convince me that these feelings are just part of the aftermath of hurting you.
we should've been questioning the abscence of reality
instead of getting hung up on just another fake remedy
{it's called love}
maybe then we could've avoided this head-on collision
between hearts.
A contest entry
- Clinic Paranoia and A Touch of Pretty Heroin by anima bella.
400 points, ended April 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me what you got! by SilentRose.
450 points, ended May 11, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like this poem a lot...free verse?? i wanted the style of poem stated...that wasa rule for the contest...but i really like it!!
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You are such an awesome writer. I am amazed everytime I read your work and not because you are my daughter. You are just....magnificent.
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I looooove this... very well written, and the perfect length. My favorite parts were "i'll spit bullets in the form of cynical words &
shoot lasers from envious eyes " and "maybe then we could've avoided this head-on collision
between hearts."
I like the form you used and the brackets and such.
I'm kind of curious- why'd you use green?
Anyway, great write, keep it up!
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i dunno. i feel in a green mood right now.
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