It was like we were conjoined twins
Through heart, Through spirit we always win
As time has past tears have been cried
But only because of those who lied
August 21st was the worst day of my life
It felt like i was getting stabbed with a butcher knife
As the van pulled up i wanted to scream
Here goes all our precious dreams
Some one help my friend has gone
I've missed her since the crack of dawn
Hoping that we'd never part
We made a club with beautiful art
You weren't just my very best friend
But a very close sister till the end
A contest entry
- Alone.....Prewrites allowed by LoveNeverDies.
370 points, ended May 17, 2007, 93 entries
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i love your poem it is amazing i think christian would love it
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Aww. this one is so cute I really like it.
~WU
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OMG (tear) I think this is one of the best and heart touching poems i'v read. Oh and it would be "stabbed WITH a BUTCHER knife" and it would be "THERE GO all our PRECIOUS dreams" awsome job though keep writing luv ya kisses
~Chelbelle
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